The Story of a Creepy Cave Ryan was a person that liked to travel and hike big mountains. Ryan like to explore through the world. Ryan was also a dark tourist which means that he like to explore places that have a creepy history. He went to Thailand Because he learned about a mountain that people say is the entry to hell. Villagers say they hear screams like people are getting burned and tortured. Ryan searched that mountain to explore it and then he found out during a war traitors and enemies were killed in a cave in the mountain. The reason of the mountain is because the genral heard voices. Ryan wen to the capital of Thailand called Bangkok to ask permission to explore the cave. He had to fill out a form have a background check to be able to go to the mountain. About two weeks past he got permission from the government, but he had to follow some rules to go the cave. The government said he cannot record his exploration and rituals in the cave and the law enforcement can’t help you if you get hurt. Ryan was nervous about climbing the cave, but he just thought all about the cave was just a myth just to bring in attractions. He was about to start climbing until a man and his kid saw him and Ryan wanted to talk to him. The man said what are you doing, Ryan replied I'm going to climb the mountain. The man face looked like he just saw a ghost. He said there are rumors that there is someone that lives there some say the is Satan home. Ryan continued to climb it took him an hour to climb the mountain. He got the cave he snuck a camera so he can record. He walked around and saw graffiti on the walls like get out and beware. He just ignored it because he wasn’t worried. In the cave there was little caves in inside he walked to one that look like it was blocked. He found a way to get in the cave there was nothing in the cave, but Ryan tripped on something he went a grab it and saw it a journal. The government said if you find anything value in the cave you need to report it. He took it and opened it was written Thai so he put it in his backpack so he can go online and translate it. He was looking at the other caves he felt something on the ground. He used his hands to dig out the item. It looked like a toy made from wood. It got late so he went home back to his apartment. He was planning to go back to the cave. He woke up the next morning eating the free breakfast from his hotel. He went back to his room to translate the journal, but he could not find the language in the computer. He stopped searching and got his climbing gear and took a taxi to a parking spot close to the mountain. He old man in his early 80’s said all you have learned was a lie. He if you want to learn more about the cave come to my house. When Ryan came the man said to sit down on the floor and I will tell you all about the cave. The man said all about the cave is wrong. In the 1900s the government used the cave for chemical studies. The government kidnaped women and children from a island two hundred miles from Thailand. The men had to go through hard labor. They changed it because they thought other countries will find out. The looked worried and said go back to your country you know to much. He went back to his hotel and packed. When he went to the airport he felt like he was getting follow but he got to the plane and made it out.
Student’s Choice Reflection
Please answer all questions in complete, grammatically correct sentences.
1.Explain the process you went through to write this paper. Please be specific. I just thought of something scary and wrote it.
2.Is this paper narrative, expository, or argumentative? How do you know? narrative because it's just telling a story is not an argument.
3.Tell me one thing you learned from writing this paper. That I know how to write good stories
4.What are you particularly proud of in this paper? That I got it done
5.What does this paper show readers about you? That I like scary stories